Friday, June 1, 2018

My first post!

The link to the whole slide is HERE. This is a piece of small writing about me. And this is a picture of me, with shapes on me so on one can identify me properly.

5 comments:

  1. Snazzy job Arna, I like the way that you made it look colorful and fancy. this piece should be in a art gallery. I like how you did your lips

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  3. Great job Arna I think you did really well I can't tell it's you. I like the way you have used colors.

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  4. Amazing work Arna!I love how you put details on your lips, hair and eyes, I also like how you used different colours.

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  5. Great work Arna!! I loved how you had nice big colors on your page it was such a warm and welcoming page great job

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I am a student at Gisborne Intermediate. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas

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